Date: 2011-05-13 02:49 am (UTC)
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Oh my God.

Best. Fic. Evar.

I switched between grinning like an idiot, laughing out loud, and holding my breath all the way through. This story was honest, real, and you get, GET all of the characters you put on the stage. Nobody was here just to fill a spot. I can tell you care about them all because you treated them all with so much affection.

Brian really IS a human golden retriever. He had me laughing so hard I was almost in tears a couple times! My favorite line:

“…And so, like, he pulls up beside this woman who is knitting, actually fucking…” O’Conner clenched his fists and mimed a garter stitch. “My buddy cannot even believe…this takes the cake, right? And so he’s like shouting, “Hey, pull over! And she’s like, no, mittens!”

Because that's so pure BRIAN. And the way he bonded with everybody differently, being what everybody needed and just so elegantly insinuating himself into the group, man, he's one part chameleon and two parts siren.

Also, you know your cars. And you know how to write Brian knowing about cars. And that was just so much fun, I wanted to sit on the hood and just listen to him talk to Dean some more.

“Dean…you really think I’m working on all this air flow just to make my hair look GQ?” Brian stripped off his thick leather gloves and vaulted over the side of the primer-ed Impala. “Torque is my middle name, baby. Sam, tell him about my headers.”

“Uh.” Sam looked at Dean blankly. “He has headers.”


The whole conversation that follows after this is just a gold mine of characterization and dialog. I'm going to quit rambling at you, just know that you rock. You ROCK, woman.
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